Tuesday, November 26, 2013

post 21

Outline
Topic: The Dangers of Teenage Drinking
Thesis: Alcohol abuse has been related to brain damage, and teenage drinking, yet there are some solutions and treatment for this.
  I.     Introduction
A.    Hook
B.     General Statement/Background Information
C.    Research Question
D.    Thesis statement

 II.         Definition of alcohol

III.         How does drinking alcohol damage teenagers’ brains?
A.    Why do teenagers drink?
B.     What are the problems of teenage drinking?

IV.       Solutions and treatment
A.    What are the solutions of teenage drinking?
B.      What is the treatment for teenage drinking?

 V.        Summary of the Answer to Sub-questions
A.    Why do teenagers drink?  
B.     What are the problems and solutions for teenage drinking?
C.    What is the treatment for teenage drinking?
                       
                       VI.       Conclusion
                       A.  Re-state thesis statement
                       B.  Summarize answers to research questions
                       C.  Final comments about the need for future research
          


post 20

Final paper

I am going to write about the dangers of teenage drinking. I have chosen this topic, because it controversial topic.  

Tuesday, November 19, 2013

post 19

Review of the third interview

1) who scored is the highest?

a) Liu, Yipeng

b) Mattson, Valerie

c) Fan, Yu

2) I like the interview for, Liu, Yipeng the most, because it is very organize, and it has a very good information.

Here is the score card for interview 3.

Tuesday, November 12, 2013

post 18

Review of the 2 interview

A) who scored highest?

1) Mattson, Valerie

2) Liu, Yipeng

3) Fan, Yu

B) I like the Interview for Mattson, Valerie, because it has a lot of information. I learned new information from her Interview.


C) Here is the score card

post 17

Ali Alshaikhahmed
Interview #3
Eng-191-28
My third interview with Anna

1-    Preparations
     
Description of preparations:
           
Three weeks ago before the interview I wrote objective about the interview in the class, the objective was about, why did I want to do the interview, with whom do I want to do the interview, and how do I intend to do it. I also wrote some questions. Then as a class we came up with ten core question for the interview. After that, I added some questions of my own to the questions that we came up with as a class. After I finished my first, and second interview, then I started looking for someone to do the third interview.

How did I approach people?

I looked for international student to do my first interview. I found someone from Burundi, and I did the interview with her, and we become friends. I went to her house twice. I asked her if she could help to find someone to do the second interview with.  She told me, she is going to talk to her roommates if anyone has time to do the interview with me. Then she called me, and told me that one of her roommates would do the interview with me.  After I finished the first and the second interviews I asked them to help me to find someone to do the final interview. They told me, they could ask one of their friends. Then we meet at Garvey, and they told one of their friends agreed to do the interview with me.

When, where, and how did I conduct the interview?


I conducted the interview with Anna, on Sunday, November 10th  we met at the campus at Garvey Commons. I went there fifteen minutes earlier before our schedule meeting time. The place was good, because it wasn’t lunch time so, it was quite. She came on time, and we sat at a table near from the window. We talk a little bit, and had some coffee and cake. I explained more information about the interview to her. I told her that I am doing it for my class, and I am going to submit it my blog, I asked her if it was okay. She said it was fine. Then I asked for her approval to record the conversation, so I would to transcript it later, and she approved it. She had some idea about what we were going to do, because her friends told her a little about it. I began the interview by simply telling her, that I have some questions to ask you. I asked her if she was ready, and she say yes. I turn on the recorder. We started the interview and it took about thirty minutes long. I turned off the recorder. The information that she gave me is similar to the information from my two previous interviews. When we finished we talked for thirteen minutes then we ate lunch there. Then we went to the Atwood together, her friend, the first interviewee was waiting for us there. 


Whom did I interview?

I interviewed with Anna. Anna is from Burundi in Eastern Africa. She is twenty-one years old. Her major is nursing.  She came here last year in 2010, and when she came she studied at the Intensive English Center in level five. She liked America, and she likes Saint Cloud, because it cold, and the weather in Burundi is not cold. She said the same as the two pervious interviewees, that Saint Cloud State University is much easier than the Universities in Burundi, she said the universities in her country is require 21 or 23 credit, but here its only twelve credits. She like to assist people that why she choose nursing major.



What surprised me?

Actually, there was not anything new for me, so I was not surprised. I interviewed two people from Burundi, and I did some research that is why nothing surprised me. In this interview I had some new information that I did not heard from the two previous interviews.

2- Interview report

Description of the interview: 

While I was doing the interview, I made sure that I pay attention to what she is going to say. So she would know that I was interesting about it, and she would want to give me more information. I made sure that I give the interviewee time to talk as long as she wanted about any points. While I was doing the interview with her, I was trying to not just asking her questions, but I tried to make as open conversation. The best thing that made interview went very well, because the interviewee was comfortable and interesting in doing it

I asked all the questions and cover a lot of topics.  The interviewee was so interesting talking about her country. So I learned a lot of things about Burundi, and Africa. She talked about the culture and the religion.  The main religion is Christian, and there are some Muslims. There are like twelve public holidays in Burundi, and she said there are like two holidays but there are not public. It was easy for me to learn and understand everything she said while I was interviewing her, because she talked specifically and coherently. So that’s allowed me to get and understand the information easily.

When I met the interviewee at the Garvey Commons last week we talked about thirty minutes. I though my first interview went very well. I think my second interview is better than the first one, because that was my first time to interview with someone. However the third interview was much easier than my first and second interviews.

3-Country report

Burundi is a small country, which is located in the East of Africa. To those who might know it, it is next to Rwanda, Congo, and Tanzania. It is a poor country and it has political problems. It all started in 1993 with the genocide of Tutsis by Hutus. After that there were small internal conflicts but it is fine now. Eight years ago the new president got elected by taking the power with his rebellion and instead of working on the development of the country he just goes around planting avocados and playing soccer.

On a social basis, Burundians are people who love to have fun. Anything calls for celebration. Meeting new people, entering a house, there are three celebrations for welcoming a baby, two celebrations before a wedding, three ceremonies for the death of person and one lasts a whole week. There are also the public holidays, which are a lot too. In Burundi there is no drinking age. By the time you have the money you can do whatever you want. Burundians are also have drinkers, not all of them but most of them. You can deduce that by the fact that the only prosperous company is the brewery: BRARUDI. The beer is consumed on a regular basis and at a fast speed that they almost compete with Germans. Another thing there is to now about Burundi is that the weather is hot and the beaches are amazing. The tropical whether call for amazing events happening mostly during the summer since everyone is in holiday back home. It is a really good place to visit.

            The language, there are tow main languages in Burundi Kirundi and French. Some people speak English, but it is not there native language. Also, there are educations for the deaf and they use American Sign Language (ASL). The education in Burundi, University of Burundi is the biggest university in Burundi.

Worked cited

      "Burundi." Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, 19 Oct. 2013. Web. 22 Oct. 2013.

       "Languages of Burundi." Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, 10 Apr. 2013. Web.
                           22 Oct. 2013.

"BURUNDI." Burundi Map / Geography of Burundi / Map of Burundi. N.p., n.d.        
                  Web. 22 Oct. 2013.

4-  Interview transcriptions of my interview with “Anna”

ALI=A

Anna (Arial)=R

A: Hi, I have an assignment for my English class and I am doing the interview with you for that.

R: Hi, I would be happy to help you doing your assignment, and I will do my best to make thing clear for you.

A: Are you ready to start?

R: Yes, we can start.

A: Can you tell me about your self?

R: Yes, my name is Anna Mumuknde. I am African from Burundi, located in the central east. I am twenty-one years old, and I have been in the United States for three years. My major is nursing.

A: How do communicate with each other in your home country?

R: The way we communicate with each other is not different than the way people communicate in the United States. We talk to communicate either face to face or through electronic device, cell phones, email, and social networks. 

A: Is English a common spoken language in your home country?

R: English is not spoken language in my home country. We use French or Kirudi, our native language. However English is a spoken language in some schools, and universities.

A: What is the clothing style for men and women?

R: The clothing style for men and women is basically as the one that is used here in the United States except that you can not wear something that is six inch above your knee when you are a female. Moreover on special occasion, wedding, and graduation women wear traditional clothes, but men are in suit and tie. You also have to look always clean!!

A: How are women and men treated differently?

R: Our society is a patriarchal society; the men have always the last word. All those stereotypes on women such as not rational, more emotional, not physically strong are there. In my country there is no women in a powerful position. The majority of decisions making job position on filled with men. Even in the household, men take all the big decision and women do not argue even if it is wrong. Men are called ‘‘umushingantahe’’ which means ‘’wise man’’.

A: How has your experience here helped you interpret and respect culture differences?

R: I learned that not everybody shared the same values and at first it was not easy to understand why people here were doing what they were doing, but after a while I got used to it. I met people who explained to me the American culture. I learned to be more opening minded and more acceptable.

A: Do you enjoy speaking with other exchange students?

R: Yes, I do enjoy speaking with other exchange student. It broadens my knowledge. And it is always fun to meet new people and learn stories about other culture.  

A: have you been able to visit other part of the United State?

R: Yes, I visited New York, Washington D.C, and Virginia. I would like to go to Florida next summer to visit my aunt she lives there. 

A: What are your home country’s major religions?

R: The major religions are Christianity mollify catholic about eighty percent, and also Islam about twenty percent.   

A: What influenced you to come to the United State? Especially, Saint Cloud state?

R: I had my best friend here Saint Cloud and I wanted to discover a new country. And I heard that America is a nice country. In addition I heard that the school here in The United States is easier than in my country.

A: What do you like the most about Saint Cloud?

R: Saint Cloud is very nice place, I like the weather here epically in the summer. I like sport center at Saint Cloud State University. However, the most thing that I like in Saint Cloud is the school. The school here is easier than in Burundi.    

A: In your society how many children can one couple have?

R: In my society, usually each couple has two or three children. However the couple is who can decide how many children they want to have. 

A: Do you have any questions for me? I have asked so many of you?

R: No actually I have nothing in my mind to ask you, but if something came up in my mind I will ask you later.

A: Thank you for doing this assignment with me. I really I appreciate your help.

R: No problem, I am glad I could help.
  

Tuesday, November 5, 2013

post 16

Ali Alshaikhahmed
Interview 2
Eng-191-28

My second interview with Ainga

1-    Preparations  
     
Description of preparations:
     
Three weeks ago before the interview I wrote objective about the interview in the class, the objective was about, why did I want to do the interview, with whom do I want to do the interview, and how do I intend to do it. I also wrote some questions. Then as a class we came up with ten core question for the interview. After that, I added some questions of my own to the questions that we came up with as a class. After I finished my first interview I started looking for someone to do the second interview.

How did I approach people?

      I looked for international student to do my first interview. I found someone from Burundi, and I did the interview with her, and we become friends. I went to her house twice. I asked her if she could help to find someone to do the second interview with.  She told me, she is going to talk to her roommates if anyone has time to do the interview with me. Then she called me, and told me that one of her roommates would do the interview with me.

When, where, and how did I conduct the interview?

      I conducted the interview with Ainga on Friday, November 2ed we met at the campus at Garvey Commons. I went there ten minutes earlier before our schedule meeting time. The place was good, because it wasn’t lunch time so, it was quite. She came on time, and we sat at a table near from the window. We talk a little bit, and had some coffee and cake. I explained more information about the interview to her. I told her that I am doing it for my class, and I am going to submit it my blog, I asked her if it was okay. She said it was fine. Then I asked for her approval to record the conversation, so I would to transcript it later, and she approved it. She had some idea about what we were going to do, because her roommate told a little about it. I began the interview by simply telling her, that I have some questions to ask you. I asked her if she was ready, and she say yes. I turn on the recorder. We started the interview and it took about thirty minutes long. I turned off the recorder. The information that she gave me is similar to the information from my previous interview. I was about to leave, but it was twelve o’clock so I told her, if we can eat lunch together. She agreed, because she was going to eat her lunch there anyway. We ate lunch and talked for about two hours. Then we walked to her place, which is near from campus. 

Whom did I interview?

     
I interviewed with Ainga. Ainga is from Burundi in Eastern Africa. Her major is nursing.  She came here last year in 2012, and when she came she studied at the Intensive English Center in level four. She liked America, and she likes Saint Cloud, because it cold, and the weather in Burundi is not cold. She said Saint Cloud State University is much easier than the Universities in Burundi, she said the universities in her country is require 21 or 23 credit, but here its only twelve credit which is the same as Guyanne said. She like to assist people that why she choose nursing major.

What surprised me?

            Actually, there was not anything new for me, so I was not surprised. I interviewed someone from Burundi, and I did some research that is why nothing surprised me.

2- Interview report

Description of the interview: 

            While I was doing the interview, I made sure that I pay attention to what she is going to say. So she would know that I was interesting about it, and she would want to give me more information. I made sure that I give the interviewee time to talk as long as she wanted about any points. While I was doing the interview with her, I was trying to not just asking her questions, but I tried to make as open conversation. The best thing that made interview went very well, because the interviewee was comfortable and interesting in doing it

            I asked all the questions and cover a lot of topics.  The interviewee was so interesting talking about her country. So I learned a lot of things about Burundi, and Africa. She talked about the culture and the religion.  The main religion is Christian, and there are some Muslims. There are like twelve public holidays in Burundi, and she said there are like two holydays but there are not public. It was easy for me to learn and understand everything she said while I was interviewing her, because she talked specifically and coherently. So that’s allowed me to get and understand the information easily.

            When I met the interviewee at the Garvey Commons last week we talked about thirty minutes. I though my first interview went very well. I think my second interview is better than the first one, because that was my first time to interview with someone.

3-Country report

            Burundi is a small country, which is located in the East of Africa. To those who might know it, it is next to Rwanda, Congo, and Tanzania. It is a poor country and it has political problems. It all started in 1993 with the genocide of Tutsis by Hutus. After that there were small internal conflicts but it is fine now. Eight years ago the new president got elected by taking the power with his rebellion and instead of working on the development of the country he just goes around planting avocados and playing soccer.

On a social basis, Burundians are people who love to have fun. Anything calls for celebration. Meeting new people, entering a house, there are three celebrations for welcoming a baby, two celebrations before a wedding, three ceremonies for the death of person and one lasts a whole week. There are also the public holidays, which are a lot too. In Burundi there is no drinking age. By the time you have the money you can do whatever you want. Burundians are also have drinkers, not all of them but most of them. You can deduce that by the fact that the only prosperous company is the brewery: BRARUDI. The beer is consumed on a regular basis and at a fast speed that they almost compete with Germans. Another thing there is to now about Burundi is that the weather is hot and the beaches are amazing. The tropical whether call for amazing events happening mostly during the summer since everyone is in holiday back home. It is a really good place to visit.

            The language, there are tow main languages in Burundi Kirundi and French. Some people speak English, but it is not there native language. Also, there are educations for the deaf and they use American Sign Language (ASL). The education in Burundi, University of Burundi is the biggest university in Burundi.

Worked cited

"Burundi." Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, 19 Oct. 2013. Web. 22 Oct. 2013.

"Languages of Burundi." Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, 10 Apr. 2013. Web. 22 Oct. 2013.

"BURUNDI." Burundi Map / Geography of Burundi / Map of Burundi. N.p., n.d. Web. 22 Oct. 2013.
 


4-  Interview transcriptions of my interview with “Ainga”

Ali=A

Ainga=AN

A: Hi, I have an assignment for my English class and I am doing the interview with you for that.

AN: Hi, I would be happy to assist you to do your assignment.

A: Are you ready to start?

AN: Sure, let get started.

A: Can you tell me about your self?

AN: I am Ainga, and I am from Burundi. I am studying nursing major at Saint Cloud state university. I have been studying in the United States since 2012. I am undergraduate student. I think after I gradate, I may transfer to another State to complete my Master degree. 

A: How do communicate with each other in your home country?

AN: The way we communicate in my home country is not different than the way people communicate in the United States. We use cell phones, social network, and the most common one that we use is Facebook. We have one way that might be a little different than here, families usually visit each other in the weekend, and in some other occasions.

A: Is English a common spoken language in your home country?

AN: In my home country, we have two common spoken languages. English became a common spoken language these days. Our native languages are French, and Kirundi that’s the two main languages in Burundi. However, we learn English in schools, and some universities, that is why English become a common spoken language in Burundi.

A: What is the clothing style for men and women?

AN: In my home country, there are two styles. First in the cities the style is not different than the style in the United States both for men and women they wear whatever they want. However the style in the small town, men usually wear jeans and t-shirt, and the women usually wear a dress.

A: How are women and men treated differently?

AN: In my home country, we treat each other as equal. Everyone in the family has his or her responsibility, and it is different from family to another family. Usually the men take responsibility to do the stuff outside the house such as taking the children to school, and the take the responsibility to the stuff in the house such as cooking, cleaning. 

A: How has your experience here helped you interpret and respect culture differences?

AN: I have a lot of friends here from different countries, and different culture. I meet them a lot, so I have to respect their culture.  

A: Do you enjoy speaking with other exchange students?

AN: Yes, I enjoy talking to exchange students from different countries. I like to learn about other’s people culture, that is why I like to speak with exchange students. I made a lot of international friends from different countries, I enjoy to meet, and to talk to them. We always talk about the culture in their countries and the culture in my country.

A: have you been able to visit other part of the United State?

AN: I like to travel a lot, and every time I have the chance to go somewhere new I will go. I have been to some other states in the United States. My uncle lives in Wisconsin, I went to visit him there. I went to a trip with my friends to North Dakota, South Dakota, and Iowa. That was a nice to trip. I think I might go to Colorado, with my roommates, after this semester.

A: What are your home country’s major religions?

AN: The major religion in my country is Christi. There are Muslims, but they are a few like about three to five percent. The Christi are about ninety percent. The other five percent have another religion or do not have religion. That how the religion is divided in my country.  

A: What influenced you to come to the United State? Especially, Saint Cloud state?

AN: The reason why I came to the United States is because the university here is easier than in Burundi. I choose Saint Cloud, because my friends are here and they told me it is a nice place to study in it, and the school is easy. 

A: What do you like the most about Saint Cloud?

AN: Saint Cloud is a nice city, I like the weather here, and I like the snow, because there is no snow in Burundi. Also the weather in summary is beautiful.

A: In your society how many children can one couple have?

AN: In our society the couple that can decide how many children they want to have. Usually they have three to four children.

A: Do you have any questions for me? I have asked so many of you?

AN:  Yes, how long have you been studying in the United States?

A: I have been studying here for two years. Do you have anything else to ask?

AN: No, thank you.

A: Thank you for helping me doing this assignment. I appreciate your help.

AN: I am happy that I could assist you.